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Kadaj by =tedzerds21:icontedzerds21:

Categories Fan Art > Traditional Art > Drawings > Games

©2009 =tedzerds21
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I hope that this is an improvement over the last piece I think it is in some respects. With the hair I spent more time on it and used better tools, but I still need to work with that.

And somehow the expression looks strange and not how I intended.

Anyway comments are very welcome. ;) Thanks for looking.

Kadaj and FF belong to SqaureEnix

Done in black prisma pencils in about 12 hrs.

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~subjectivereality Jun 27, 2009, 9:17:12 PM
Aha, I love this! The time you spent in the hair really shows, it's an ace job. I particularly like the work you did in the leather, though. :3

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=tedzerds21 Jun 27, 2009, 9:38:00 PM
Wow thank you very much. :heart: :hug: I'm pleased you think the hair is good, I really wanted to make sure I did a better job than last time. And thank you also for the fave and the compliment on the leather part, I always enjoy drawing/colouring leather. ;)
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~JesseZojo Jun 27, 2009, 11:44:56 PM
I have to go to work tommorrow morning.

There should be an international Free Pizza Day each year.

The only thing that looks off is the neck on the right side. It doesn't match up with the right shoulder...like the shoulder is sticking out just a little too much judging by the way the neck is turned.

Add peanut butter m&ms AND chocolate chips to make the ultimate cookie.

There...a comment, suggestion, critique, and cookie recipe

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*MrsGraves Jun 28, 2009, 12:12:36 AM
Nice work!

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~LittleMissNowhere Jun 28, 2009, 12:16:53 AM
If you're ever actually in need of a good cookie recipie, I have an awesome choc chip one.

That said, I really think you have a really good style for monochrome. And the expression is kind of oddly knowing. I like :)

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=tedzerds21 Jun 28, 2009, 1:07:46 AM
Aw nuts I was hoping no one would notice the wonky neck, but yeah I know it looks really off.

Anyway thanks for taking the time to critique it, the more I look at it, the more I think I may be able to fix it. Also thanks very much for the fave too, I appreciate it. Cheers! ^_^
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=tedzerds21 Jun 28, 2009, 1:07:57 AM
Thank you very much! ^_^
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=tedzerds21 Jun 28, 2009, 1:12:02 AM
Thank you. :heart: :hug: I'm pleased you like it. :)

Could you give me the cookie recipe and bake them for me too? Lol, I'm the worst baker of foods ever, even the water gets burned; I have yet to meet a recipe I can't butcher. :p ;)
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~LittleMissNowhere Jun 28, 2009, 3:23:10 AM
haha I'm sure customs would love that *shifty eyes*

Thats so cute that you can't cook! I'm actually not too bad. I had a little freak out when I was 15 or so, that I would leave home and have no idea how to cook/clean/iron etc. So I set about learning all of those skills (thus, 3 years later, I am pro). Even if I am still at home...

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~mk-kayem Jun 28, 2009, 3:48:58 AM
Yesyesyes, the hair is better, more highlighted and the ends are soft... great work on that!

Again, I love the big, expressive eyes and the shadows of the face, neck and jacket.

I'm not sure, but the right eye probably should be lighter than the left since its covered by hair. Maybe the neck is slightly long? I don't know, maybe I'm looking too hard to try not to just gush over it. :)

What can I say, it's lovely! *hugs* kaydy
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